Political Science 468
Comparative Foreign Policy
Summer 2015
Bill Newmann
This course will become POLI 368 Comparative National
Security Policy in the fall of 2015
It counts for the International Relations
concentration
(no matter what number it
was/is when you take it)
Office Hours:
This is an online course, so there will be no office hours. However, e-mail as often as you like.
e-mail: wnewmann@vcu.edu
home page with links to other syllabi. If you are a blackboard use and encounter
problems, you can also access this syllabus through my home page: http://www.people.vcu.edu/~wnewmann/index.htm
Introduction:
This course is an on line
course. All papers will be submitted
through e-mail. All papers will be
returned with comments through e-mail as well. There
will be no class meetings. A full
schedule of the class assignments and expectations is included in this
syllabus.
This course is an examination of theoretical and
policy-related aspects of foreign policy.
All readings and all papers explore one simple, but difficult to answer
question: Why do states behave they way they do in the international arena? As
you read the assigned books and write your papers keep that question in
mind. Scholars of international
relations and foreign policy have been trying to answer that question for
decades. Now it’s you turn. Linked to the syllabus is a short essay on theories of
international relations and foreign policy. Read this before you read anything else
(unless of course you’ve already started reading). This is a good preliminary introduction that
will be a useful reference for you as you read and write. Please read this or you may find yourself
lost. In the past this course has been
taught by examining several nations’ foreign policies. This semester, however, the course will be a
more theoretical examination of what is the root explanation for states’
foreign policies.
This is a writing intensive class. You will read five books and write five
papers. Each paper is worth 20% of the grade. You will have an opportunity to
rewrite one paper to get a better grade; the new grade will replace the old
one, but it will not remove a late penalty.
That rewrite can be turned in at any time during the two weeks of the
class, but must be turned in by the last day of the semester,
Your initial papers may be rocky, but I am looking for
your effort and indications that you are learning. Early difficulty will be
overshadowed by the quality of your papers at the end of the course. Your grade
will reflect the improvement. In other words, put the grade aspect aside for
the moment and learn. If you learn something, you will ultimately be happy with
your grades. What you have learned and your level of effort will be reflected
in your final grade. So, don’t be discouraged
if your early grades aren’t what you had hoped.
Texts
The following books are
available at the Virginia Book Company (Franklin and Shafer St.) and at the VCU
Bookstore. They are not on reserve.
·
Josef Joffe.
The Myth of America's Decline: Politics,
Economics, and a Half Century of False Prophecies (NY: Liveright, 2014) 978-0871408464
·
David Shambaugh.
China Goes Global: The Partial Power (Oxford
University Press, 2014) 978-0199361038)
·
Rajan
Menon and Eugene Rumer. Conflict in Ukraine: The Unwinding of the Post-Cold War Order (Cambridge,
MA: MIT Press, 2015) 978-0262029049
·
Ray Takeyh. Guardians of
the Revolution (Oxford University Press, 2011) 978-0199754106
·
Jessica Stern and
J.M. Berger. ISIS:
The State of Terror (NY:
Ecco, 2015) 978-0062395542
Basic Requirements
·
Each paper must
be five full pages in length, at minimum (four pages and one sentence is not
the same as five pages); more than five full pages is no problem (I’ll read as
much as you want to write; if you are very interested in a subject and want to
play around with the ideas for more than five pages, then I am very happy;
enjoy yourself and I will enjoy your enthusiasm and ideas). But fewer than five
full pages would lead to a significant point deduction.
·
Each paper is
worth 20% of the grade
·
You will have about
a week to read each book and write each paper.
·
Papers should be doubled-spaced
with one-inch margins, and reasonable sized font (11 or 12 point). Shorter
pages with wide margins and large print size font will be penalized.
·
All paper are to
be submitted over email at midnight of the date the paper is due, so if the
paper is due June 17, that means midnight June 17 as June 17 becomes June
18. The full schedule is below. Please
email an attachment and cut and paste the text of the paper into the body of
the email. The latter part is very
important; please don’t forget. Do not put the paper in the Blackboard
digital dropbox.
·
I will make
comments on your paper and email that version back to you. If you have questions,
we can email back and forth as often as you like. I will try to mark up your papers pretty
heavily with grammar, substance, and devil’s advocacy, but the grade will
reflect more of the substance. Since
this is a writing intensive class, expect to work on the writing style. Even if your first papers are a bit ragged,
your last papers will be sharply analytical and organizationally elegant. I
will get your papers back to you as soon as I can. I will get them back before the next paper is
due, so that you can use my comments to improve your next paper.
·
Revision You will be required to rewrite one of your papers
based on the comments I make on it after I have graded it. This is a
requirement, but it is also an opportunity. If you are unhappy with a grade,
you get the chance to fix a paper. Any one of the papers can be chosen for a
rewrite except the last paper. I will
replace the grade for the paper you rewrite.
Use my comments on the paper to fix the papers you rewrite. Please leave my comments on the paper when
you submit the rewrite.
The Papers
I base the grade on several things:
1.
Introductory
paragraph
2.
Organization of
the paper
3.
Analysis of the
author’s argument
4.
Command of the
supporting evidence the author introduces
5.
Your argument and
ideas
In your paper, please do not simply summarize the
book. Your paper should be 40% summary
and 60% your ideas – critical comments on the author’s ideas and argument. When
I say critical, I don’t mean that you have to disagree with the author. I mean that you should assess the author’s
argument in terms of:
1.
consistency (are there big contradictions in the author’s argument?)
2.
logic (does the argument make sense to you?),
3.
supporting evidence (does the author’s evidence support the
theory?)
4.
accuracy (does the author’s argument seem realistic given what
you know about the world. If so,
why? If not, why not?)
5.
Focus on the
concepts and ideas, not on the writing style
Be creative. If
you want to redesign the author’s theories and arguments, go ahead. What are your ideas on the subject? What is the author missing? Where does the argument miss the point? What are the logical conclusions of the
author’s arguments and your ideas?
On Writing a Good Analytical Paper
For example, someone might say "China is an
expansionist nation because it is going to invade Taiwan." Challenge that idea; analyze it. Ask and
answer some questions. In this case the author’s conclusion is that China is
expansionist. The author’s evidence is that China will invade Taiwan. Is it
valid to prove a point using evidence that has not yet happened? Can someone
say "I know that you are hungry because I believe that you will eat
soon?" Isn't that simply hypothetical? If China hasn't invaded Taiwan, but
the author believes it will, then the entire argument is based not on what
China is or has done, but on what the author perceives about China. Have we
learned anything about China? No, but we have learned something about the
author. (I'm using an example taken from an op-ed piece in the Washington
Post from 1997, which used this exact logic.) Now, you may believe that
China is an expansionist power, but the author made a poor argument. So, you've
got to make the argument stronger. If the author is convinced that China will
invade Taiwan because China is building missile batteries along its eastern
coast, buying equipment for amphibious landings, practicing amphibious
landings, holding military exercises near Taiwan that simulate an invasion of
an island, and saying “we will invade Taiwan.”
Then the author has a better argument.
What have we done here? We’ve
done some basic social science analysis. We've challenged the author's
argument, examined his cause and effect logic, and revealed his assumptions.
The
introduction of your paper (Important!!!) This is the difference between an “A”
and a “B”!
Writing for social science, in particular Political Science, is
different from other types of writing.
It is absolutely crucial that you make sure that the reader of your
paper knows a few things all within the first couple of paragraphs of the
paper. Here are the three key things the
reader must know: (1) what is your theme or argument; (2) how you are going to
go about supporting that theme or argument, and 3) what are your conclusions.
In other words, these first paragraphs or first paragraph should provide your
reader with a "road map" that explains exactly what you will say
during the paper. This is not as difficult as it sounds. Basically, what you
need to do is write the outline you have for your paper in complete sentences in
the first few paragraphs of the paper.
This is different from journalism, or History, or magazine writing, but
it is the way we do it in Political Science. The reader should know what you
are going to say by the end of the introduction. It flows from the nature of government where
your boss is a busy governmental official and has about two minutes of time to
give to the five weeks of work you’ve been doing on analyzing some issue. So for instance, if your boss is the Director
of National Intelligence (DNI) and the DNI has asked you to write an analysis
of whether Iran has nuclear weapons. He/She needs a
quick summary of your answer that can be digested in about five minutes because
he/she will be presenting that answer to the President of the US who will give
the DNI about two minutes to present the answer. So the style is to be very clear and concise
and summarize everything in those first few paragraphs. In short, if Political Science scholars wrote
mystery novels, the first sentence of the book would be: “The butler did it.” This is why political scientists don’t write
mystery novels.
Here is an example of what I think is a good introduction to an
analytical paper. This is a sample intro
paragraph for an analysis of Fareed Zakaria’s book From Wealth to Power. Notice how it summarizes Zakaria’s
ideas then adds the ideas of the paper’s author.
In From Wealth
to Power Fareed Zakaria examines what causes
wealthy nations to become “great powers” with large militaries and global
foreign policy ambitions. Historically,
some nations translate their wealth into power, while others do not. The reasons why nations make this transition
is crucial – in almost all historical cases in which wealthy nations become
militarily powerful the result is international conflict and/or war. Though most analysts say that the transition
from wealth to power and ambition is inevitable, Zakaria
argues that the key ingredient in a nation’s rise to global power lies within
the domestic political system. When a
nation’s government becomes strong, ready to use the nation’s resources for
political ends at home, it also becomes ready to harness the nation’s resources
to achieve political goals abroad. His
case study of the lag between US wealth (mid-19th century) and US
ambition (late 19th century) provides an excellent argument of how
the strength of the US government lagged behind the growth of its economy. However, Zakaria
has discounted two other important state-level factors that play a role in this
transition: national ideology and historical legacy. Some ideologies are more aggressive than
others and will shape the way a nation deals with the rest of the world. Some nations have a historical legacy of
insecurity (Russia), or sense of international mission (US), or aggression
(Japan), or even regional supremacy (China) that deeply influences its foreign
policy. Adding these variables into an
assessment of a nation’s potential rise to power brings a more accurate vision
of what translates wealth to power. This paper will first examine Zakaria’s argument then discuss the importance of national
ideology and historical legacy. A
conclusion considers the shape of the 21st century, speculating on
the wealthy nations that will seek to increase their power in the international
system. Ironically, this analysis
suggest that the even as the US declines in relative wealth, its ability to use
national resources, its ideology, and its historical legacy will lead it to
fight – politically and even militarily – to maintain its leadership role.
You could construct an outline of your paper, an
outline that could be used to develop headings and subheadings in the paper:
1.
Introduction
2.
Zakaria: Domestic Ability to Use Resources for Foreign Policy
Goals
3.
The Missing
Variables (these are your ideas)
1.
National ideology
2.
Historical Legacy
4.
Conclusions: US
Hegemony: Same Ambition, Less Wealth
The key here is that by the
end of the first paragraph, I know what you will write about. I know what your analysis will be. I know your conclusions.
1.
Margins and Font. Papers should be doubled-spaced with one-inch margins, and reasonable
sized font (11 point). Shorter pages with wide margins and large print size
font will be penalized.
4.
Official Titles. Provide someone’s title in the text the first time you mention them if
they are an elected official (Tim Kaine, Governor of
Virginia) or an appointed official (Assistant Secretary of Defense for
International Security Affairs Paul Nitze). Thereafter, you can refer to them as Kaine or Nitze. So for the first
mention, you’d say: “National Security Adviser Henry Kissinger told his
assistant to.…” From that point on, you
can simply say “Kissinger told his assistant to…” When you mention a senator or
representative, say: Senator John Warner (R-VA) to introduce and after than you
can just say Warner or Senator Warner.
a) So, for example, if noted terrorist scholar Reed
Richards says in his book that “Al-Qaeda probably only consists of 10,000
people worldwide.” Do not give me a
sentence in your paper that reads: Reed Richards says that “Al-Qaeda probably
only consists of 10,000 people worldwide.”
Give me something that says: One scholar estimates that al-Qaeda only
has 10,000 active members globally. (Richards, 2003, p. 27). The book doesn’t actually exist, but in the
example, I’ve used a parenthetical reference, which gives the author’s name,
the year of publication, and the page number.
b) For your paper if you want to cite specific
information, use parentheticals or endnotes or footnotes, but you don’t need to
include a bibliography if all the citations are from the assigned book.
c) Or if Ben Grimm concludes in his book (not a real
book) that: “Al-Qaeda’s growth depends on economic reform in the Middle
East. Elimination of poverty is not the
biggest problem. Rather it is the ability of the middle class to gain social
and economic mobility.” You might agree
or not agree or you may be citing five or sis ways to
combat al-Qaeda. In any case, you don’t need to quote. Say something like: “Economic reforms
designed to allow the middle class to grow and prosper may be the key to
battling al-Qaeda in the future” (Grimm, 2004, p. 235). Or if you agree, then
say: “Economic reforms designed to allow
the middle class to grow and prosper are the key to battling al-Qaeda in the
future” (Grimm, 2004, p. 235). If you
don’t agree, you can say: “Some scholars argue that economic reforms designed
to allow the middle class to grow and prosper are the key to battling al-Qaeda
in the future (Grimm, 2004, p. 235). This
argument is too simplistic and provides no remedy for reducing terrorist
recruitment success in the short term.”
d) A good quote is this: According to Osama bin-Laden,
“for over seven years the United States has been occupying the lands of Islam
in the holiest of places, the Arabian Peninsula, plundering its riches,
dictating to its rulers, humiliating its people, terrorizing its neighbors, and
turning its bases in the Peninsula into a spearhead through which to fight the
neighboring Muslim peoples.” (Bin-Laden, 1998).
This is an excerpt from the 1998 fatwa of OBL. Bin-Laden is a participant, a historical
figure. His exact words are important.
6.
Keep a Copy.
Make a copy of the paper for yourself before you hand it in to me. There are
two reasons for this. If you have a copy, you don't have to worry about me
losing a copy. I have never lost anyone's paper, but just in case you should
always make sure that you have a copy of your paper with you, in any class, not
just this one.
7.
Back up.
WHEN YOU TYPE YOUR PAPER ON A COMPUTER MAKE SURE YOU HAVE A BACKUP DISK WITH
THE PAPER ON IT. AS YOU TYPE THE PAPER SAVE THE FILE TO THE BACKUP DISK EVERY
TEN MINUTES OR SO. Don’t just leave it on your hard drive and hope it will be
safe. A super safe way to deal with this
is to use your own, already built-in cloud system. Email the drafts of your paper to yourself
and then you know it will be safe on the VCU system and you can access it from
anywhere on the planet. Also, remember that if you type on the university
computers be careful. Putting your paper on the hard drive in the computer lab
is risky – they sweep the hard drives of files at night. Keep a backup copy for
yourself. I have several backup copies of anything I write. You don't ever want
to lose work because you didn't back it up.
8.
No Wikipedia.
Do not use Wikipedia or any other web-based encyclopedia. It is unreliable and you should have stopped
using encyclopedias for research in elementary school.
9.
Reliability of the Internet. Be careful about internet
sources. Make sure the source is
reliable. Remember that anyone can post
anything on the internet. There aren’t
necessarily any editors or fact checkers.
For example, there is a website that links me to the Kennedy assassination;
I was two years old. Ask me if you have questions about this (internet sources,
not if I was involved in the Kennedy assassination; I wasn’t).
10. The use of
“I”. Try to avoid using “I” in
non-fiction. Instead of “I will discuss
three problems…” say “This essay addresses three problems…”
11. The use of a
semicolon. Semicolons connect two
complete sentences that are related to each other. For example: “I went to the pizzeria to get a
pie; it was closed.” You could also
write them as two separate sentences if you wanted. The following would be an incorrect use of a
semicolon: “I had six very tasty pizzas last week; except for that crappy one
from the big chain store.” That should
be a comma, not a semicolon. The test is
this: If the two sentences you are
connecting with a semicolon could stand alone as complete sentences, then use a
semicolon. It becomes obvious: “Except
for that crappy one from the big chain store” is not a sentence.
12. The use of
“however”. This trips everyone
up. It’s a bit similar to
semicolons. “I went to the pizzeria;
however, when I got there, it was closed.”
Notice the semicolon, not the comma.
That’s because “When I got there, it was closed” could be a complete
sentence by itself. Also, this sentence
is like the use of a semicolon. You are
connecting two complete sentences. In
this case, you’re connecting two sentences that are related, but related in a
very specific way. The second sentence
is adding the “however” to show a different expectation than the first sentence
implies. The first sentence implies you
were going to eat pizza. The second
sentence says you didn’t. On the other
hand, look at this example: “I went to the pizzeria. Upon arriving, however, I found out it was
closed.” The “however” is surrounded by
commas. That’s because “upon arriving”
is not a sentence by itself. Here’s
another aspect of this. “I went to the
pizzeria, the one with the best pizza in the world.” There is a comma there because “the one with
the best pizza in the world” is not a sentence by itself. These are the
non-fiction rules. In fiction, you can do anything you want. Read James Joyce. I can’t! There is no punctuation.
14. Some useful rules:
1.
Numbers under 100
should be written as out. So you would
not have this sentence. “President Bush
met with 3 advisers.” It would be “President
Bush met with three advisers.”
2.
When you have an
acronym, such as NSDD-75 or UN. First
write out the name in full: National Security Decision Directive (NSDD) 75, or
United Nations (UN). After that first use of the term, use the acronym.
First, never, ever, ever, ever, ever,
ever cut and paste anything from a source into your document unless you place
it in quotes and cite the source of the quote. And generally in a paper that is
under a few dozen papers, there is never a need to quote anything that is not
an official source. Why quote anything
unless the exact works are crucial. So
quoting a President or Foreign Minister or a witness to an event is useful, but
quoting a scholar or journalist is not.
For the purposes of this paper, there is no reason to quote anyone. The
paper is too short for quotes.
This is really not a fine line.
Did you write the sentence or not? Did you come up with the idea or
not? When in doubt, it’s relatively
simple: never include something in your paper that you did not write unless it
is quotes and then it also must be cited.
Anything that is not your idea must be cited. Plagiarism is a violation
of the VCU Honor Code and I will not hesitate to charge someone with a
violation if I catch plagiarism. If you
have questions about what is plagiarism, ask me or see VCU’s Writing
Integrity Workshop.
If paraphrasing an idea: make sure to change the verb you use so it is
different from the verb used in the source.
Make sure you change everything but the proper nouns. So let’s say,
you’ve read this in your source: “The President phoned the Prime Minister immediately
after he received the news.” That may be
the point you want to make in your paper, but you shouldn’t quote that and
can’t copy it (or you’d be plagiarizing).
The only words you really can use here would be “President” and “Prime
Minister.” These are the proper nouns.
So put it into your own words. How
about: “Once the President had been informed, he contacted the Prime Minister.”
And then cite the source of the information.
That would not be a quote problem or a suspicion of plagiarism.
But just because someone else has already written an idea that you
agree with 100% doesn't mean you can't discuss it in your paper. Just point out
whose idea it is; paraphrase it in your own words, cite the source of the idea,
and expand upon it. Generally, that is how Political Science works. 90% of all
Political Science articles and books do the following:
There
are various analyses of al-Qaeda’s power. Realists say al-Qaeda is a nuisance,
but has no real ability to achieve any of its regional and global goals. (Stan
2004, pp 1-17). Regionalists disagree, arguing that al-Qaeda can use its
passive support to instigate the overthrow of many governments in the Middle
East; however, once it does so, it makes itself more vulnerable to destruction
by conventional-style US military operations.
(Kyle 2005, pp 365-374). Other scholars contend that al-Qaeda could
successfully achieve its goals. Once
having taken control of several regimes in the Middle East, the US will not
have the capability to fight four or five simultaneous wars such as the current
war in Iraq; the US will only have one option – containment of a new
revolutionary ideology in a new cold war, in which
terrorism will play a key role in the balance of power (Cartman
2005, pp. 27-42). Each analysis has merit; however, this essay concludes that a
significant effort by the US at bringing populations in the Middle East into
the realm of global capitalism and democracy, if accompanied by a new emphasis
on human rights and international labor standards, will isolate al-Qaeda from
Muslim populations around the world and leave it an extremist and fringe
organization.
The article would then outline the theories of the
realists, regionalists, and others, analyze each one, and then develop the
fourth theory. There is no problem as long as Stan, Kyle, and Cartman get credited with developing their theories, and
the fourth theory is new. If the fourth theory belongs to a fourth author
(Kenny? Timmy?), then these authors must be cited and your article will show why
his theory is superior to the other three.
I will catch any plagiarism. It
takes me less than ten seconds to take any sentence from your paper and cut and
paste it into a google search engine. If
you have taken the paper from a document on the web, google will identify the
source in under a second. I know none of
you would ever try this, so tell your friends.
The VCU library has a tutorial on how to cite and avoid plagiarism: http://guides.library.vcu.edu/integrity.
And never, ever, ever, ever, ever, ever cut and paste anything from
a source into your document unless you place it in quotes and cite the source
of the quote. (He said it again! And in
italics! Must mean something!) (And it’s in bold, and italics, and red; maybe I
should pay attention to this.)
Last points
LATE PAPERS
I will mark late papers down ONE GRADE for
each day late. That means that an
almost perfect paper -- one that I would give 98 points to -- becomes an 88 if
one day late, 78 if two days late,... all the way down to 8 points if nine days
late, and zero points if ten days late. Talk to me if you are having some
family or personal problems. If there is a serious need to get an extension on
the paper, I will give you an extension. I do realize that there are more
important things in life than this class and this assignment. So if you
run into a problem, talk to me. Computer problems do not count as a problem
that warrants an extension. If you are writing your paper at the last
minute and you have a problem, the moral of the story is that you should not
have been writing your paper at the last minute. If you have a printer
problem, no problem, give me your disk and I will print up the paper, or come
to my office hours and we'll print up the paper at my office. If you have
some kind of computer problem, and you are not writing your paper at the last
minute, let me know. Maybe I can help.
Also, remember that you have a
rewrite. Hypothetically, is you are
about to crash and burn on a paper and can’t get me a finished product on time,
hand me a rough draft (or a sentence).
You’ll get a horrible grade, but then use that paper as your
rewrite. This is a built-in loophole.
Use it if you need to. It’s much better than a late penalty.
Class
Schedule
This is a tight schedule. Don’t fall behind because you may not be able
to catch up.
Before you read anything else, read the small essay
called theories of
international relations and foreign policy.
May 18: Begin reading Joffe
May 25: Joffe paper due at
May 26: Begin reading Shambaugh
June 1: Shambaugh paper due
at
June 2: Begin reading Menon and Rumer
June 8: Menon and Rumer paper
due at
June 9: Begin reading Takeyh
June 15: Takeyh paper due at
June 16: Begin reading Stern and Berger
June 22:
·
Stern and Berger
paper due (as June 22 becomes June 23
·
Rewrite due also
at midnight (although you can turn this in at any earlier time if you choose)
Notice
that we’re going a bit over the deadline for the class. Officially it ends June
18, but I want to give you a few extra days. With this schedule, you get one week for each
paper.